Saturday, January 22, 2022

Proximate Sietel

Proximate Sietel

This is a seven line poem with no particular measure or metre and may be a bit challenging.
It is more a written form of poetry rather than spoken.
There are two forms:

Fro Proximate Sietel and Ba Proximate Sietel

The Fro Proximate Sietel is where the first line starts with S, the second line ends with e, the third line starts with V, the fourth line ends with e, the fifth line starts with N, the sixth line ends with t and the last line starts with H.Also the second and fourth lines rhyme and the sixth and seventh lines are a rhyming couplet.

Perserverance

Slow but confident
Hard goals you will achieve
Victory comes at dawn
When deception you no longer believe
Narrate your story intelligently
With no pretension for what you have not
Hold steadfast to deserve what you got


The Ba Proximate Sietel is where thefirst line ends with s, the second line starts with E, the third line ends with v, i or u, the fourth line starts with E, the fifth line ends with n, the sixth line starts with T and the last line ends with h. There is no rhyme scheme in this form but there can be if so desired.

The Cure

Only the saviour saves
Even if the imp believe
it cannot contract H.I.V
Eventually truth expels falsity
to form a rejuvenation
that embodies a healing
to form a sign of triumph

Hope In Exisistence

In the shadow of lonliness
Eyes can't find enough laughter
for to find light impromptu
Elevation from dark dissent
and a sense of self liberation
Temperamentally stable
For the illusion of self worth

Good Governance

Four to five year terms
Enters the dreams of schemers
Where the commander's good sense need an alibi
Especially when his decisions exclude us
and we are for whom and from whom his path was shown
Terrible daily ordeals is our levity
for the good governance we chose to put forth

 

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